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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
07/27/2009 07:53 am

The Alternate Universe aspect of this story is going to be absolutely fascinating, I can tell.  You grab the reader with familiar aspects of the story right from the beginning and twist them immediately.  I can't wait to read the rest!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad I grabbed you...umm...I mean grabbed your attention =0)




Prologue
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/25/2009 02:53 pm

I am anxious to see what happens when she goes back.  I felt really angry with Elohir and Glorfindel for their treatment of her - it seemed as though they were completely taking their anger at her decision and abusing her to make themselves feel better, somehow - as if she is not worthy to go, while they themselves would have been.  It's a very interesting dynamic.



Author's Response:

I felt like men would deal with their hurt by showing anger or indifference. And since we know Elrohir/Elladan, went on a killing rampage after their mother was tortured by orcs - I figured Elrohir's instinct would be to use anger to cover his pain. =( But its truly a sign of how much they both love her and are afraid for her.




Chapter 3 ~ Fleeting Moments
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/25/2009 02:22 pm

I know this is a continuation of the previous chapter, but I still have to tell you how much I love your treatment of the emotions involved in this decision.  It's absolutely wonderful, and the writing is close to flawless.  Bravo, my friend!



Author's Response:

You're making me blush and grin ridiculously! Thanks again. *hugs*




Chapter 2 ~ Sacrifices (Part 2)
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/25/2009 02:08 pm
You are tearing my heart out with the pain of this decision. You write very poignantly.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Its very sad in the beginning but hopefully you'll be pleased with the upcoming events.

 




Chapter 2 ~ Sacrifices (Part 1)
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/18/2009 11:52 pm

Oh my heavens.  What suspense you have built!  Please, post more soon!  Poor, poor Laureanna.  What will she choose - and how could she refuse?



Author's Response:

Thanks :) This is already 22 chapters long but its still a WIP so I've got much more in store!




Chapter 1 ~ Daughter of the House of the Golden Flower
Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/18/2009 11:16 pm

This chapter has held me completely spellbound.  As I read it, I see clearly how the small change in plans changed the fate of Middle Earth completely, and I can see it so well that it almost seems as though I'm reading the masterpiece itself.  I want to cry for Frodo and Sam and for the members of the Fellowship...and I want to know what happened to Cirdan and Mithrandir, taken prisoner but not, as far as we are currently aware, killed.  I'm off to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! When I first sent this chapter to my beta she emailed me back and said, "are you KIDDING me?" lol I was a little worried that no one would read past the Prologue. I'm glad you are intrigued!




Prologue
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