Very nice! I loved reading about a character not always written about, and about something we know happened only we didn't get to read it in the book. Neville was very in character - emboldened by the firewhiskey but still nervous and uncertain. It was sweet - nice job! ~Gina :)
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed this story. I don't write a lot of Neville despite that I like him and Hannah a lot.