Alice is probably my favorite secondary character in the whole Twilight series - she's just so much fun, so much passion, so much power all rolled into one. I enjoyed this look into her thoughts very much. You did a good job of describing the turmoil I know she would have felt upon leaving her family behind, especially knowing that they would have to think she had simply abandoned them. Great work!
That is a beautiful story, its amazing how well you got in to mind of Alice. Wonderful job :D