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Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
07/15/2009 11:31 am

Alice is probably my favorite secondary character in the whole Twilight series - she's just so much fun, so much passion, so much power all rolled into one.  I enjoyed this look into her thoughts very much.  You did a good job of describing the turmoil I know she would have felt upon leaving her family behind, especially knowing that they would have to think she had simply abandoned them.  Great work!




A Vision of Shattered Crystal
Reviewer: Keeri (Signed)
06/30/2009 01:46 pm

That is a beautiful story, its amazing how well you got in to mind of Alice. Wonderful job :D




A Vision of Shattered Crystal
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