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Reviewer: Maira (Signed)
06/29/2009 10:37 pm

That was good fun! I really like reading about what happened after Breaking Dawn. And this was goodly. Me likey! : )



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love thinking about what might have happened after Breaking Dawn.



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Reviewer: KrysCullen (Signed)
06/29/2009 04:33 pm
Aww, that's cute! I can just see Rosalie throwing a large, ostentatious wedding. The Nessie/Jake relationship is cute too, great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I find Nessie/Jake kind of adorable.



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Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/23/2009 10:11 pm

I was a bit confused in the beginning of your story as to who was talking and why Nessie would pretend to be Edward's neice. But then, it became apparant who was talking (Bella) and why the ruse. I thought it was neat how you aged Nessie based on what we knew from BD.

I liked how you made known Edward's inferior feelings regarding how he compares himself to Bella and her abilities. We witness how he is still unsure of himself and the reader can't help but want to assuage his fears. You do a great job keeping him canon.

It was nice how you added to Rosalie's and Bella's tentative relationship.

You might want to keep an eye on your capitalization after speaking quotes.

~Lacey



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  You're right - at the time of writing this story my dialogue tag punctuation needed a lot of fixing.  I never like to change my old fanfics, because I prefer to be able look back at my past mistakes and see the improvements I've made.  But thanks anyway.

 

I love thinking about how the dynamics between characters, like Rosalie and Bella, would change with time.  Rosalie is one of my favourite characters to explore in this way.



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