Author's Response:
Sorry for making you cry! But I'm glad my story could have such an affect on you. ;)
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Reviewer: KrysCullen (Signed)
07/10/2009 11:30 pm
You... you made me cry!!! It was perfect though, I know that's exactly how Edward felt when he said goodbye. It's just so heartbreaking.
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Reviewer: laceymoibella (Signed)
06/26/2009 10:22 pm
You do a great job in portraying Edward's fear of Bella not loving him. Excellent in how you demonstrate his struggle in what he says to Bella and what he actually feels. One suggestion is to watch your repetition of words in succession. You can insert another in its place and still get the same idea across. I love your end note, too. *winks*
~Lacey
Author's Response:
Thank you again. I've always loved the idea of Edward having just as many insecurities as Bella. And I hadn't noticed my repitition - I'll watch out for that.
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