Heyy.. I also really like the twists and turns! ^_^ .. Also how you asked directly towards the readers with questions. As well as changing the font style for some words which was really well done. But there was a time when the codes was visible (<I>please</I>). However, other than that, wonderful.

A great ending too, even though it was tragic that she had died accidently.. & to add onto that, who would have guessed that she was pregnant?!? Speaking of which, your story really made me read on till the very end. ^_^

I like the many twists and turns, and the way that you were kept guessing until the very end. It was also a very satisfactory ending. On the whole it was fairly well written. The spelling and grammar was good.

However, on the second last line I don't agree with your use of a semi-colon, but that might just be me.