Heyy.. I also really like the twists and turns! ^_^ .. Also how you asked directly towards the readers with questions. As well as changing the font style for some words which was really well done. But there was a time when the codes was visible (<I>please</I>). However, other than that, wonderful.
A great ending too, even though it was tragic that she had died accidently.. & to add onto that, who would have guessed that she was pregnant?!? Speaking of which, your story really made me read on till the very end. ^_^
just saw this one sorry. thank you for the review I'm glad you liked it. I'll see if I can fix those coding errors.