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Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
05/21/2009 12:49 pm

What a very cool glimpse into Carlisle's thoughts.  I liked his sense of honor - it reminded me of Edward's responses to Bella when she wanted to be with him before they were married, about propriety and honor.  I also liked hearing his thoughts about going from a companion-type relationship with Edward to a truly grounded family with permanent ties of love.  You did a great job with characterization here.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Carlisle's character fascinates me, so I am so happy to hear that I'm doing well with him.  I really appreciate your thoughts on that!




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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/20/2009 11:44 pm

I am glad to see that this is not completed.  I do look forward to your next chapter.  I love how you captured my attention right from the beginning.  You did a wonderful job.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really love Carlisle, and I like to see him struggle with his dark side, so I'm glad you enjoyed it, too.  It's not a very long story, but I hope you'll like it.




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