Author's Response:
Thanks! For some reason I really love to write about Edward and Bella in the most mundane situations... seeing how they interact when there's no danger around them. Glad you liked it again! x
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Reviews For Newton's Outfitters
Reviewer: KrysCullen (Signed)
05/30/2009 09:51 pm
That is so adorable! I can see where Edward is coming from, just enjoying watching Bella work because it's so human! This was really cute, I loved it!
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Reviewer: Strider (Signed)
05/21/2009 01:17 am
This is really sweet and fun, with a little undercurrent of wistfulness. I like to see Edward being playful, and poor Bella being so insecure she doens't know whether he's making fun or not. Very good characterization! Nice work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm always unsure when it comes to writing from Bella's perspective, so I'm glad to hear you thought they were in character. x
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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
05/13/2009 07:44 pm
I think this was a very cute glimpse into the normal life of Bella and Edward. I liked the conversation between the pair. Just a quick thing I noticed, you kept saying the 'till' which is actually called the 'register' in the US, and Bella would have thought of it as such. ;) Wonderful job!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! And thanks for the correction on my British-isms, too. I've learnt a lot about the differences between English and American language since I've begun writing fanfiction! :)
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