Reviews For Love

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Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)
05/31/2009 10:12 pm

This one was a bit technical with all the explantions of the types of love but it was still a nice piece.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I really tried to see emotion in the same way Jasper would see them - intricate details such as different types of a particular emotion (love) included.  I really wish I could have included his thirst too, but I ran out of words. x



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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/11/2009 12:40 pm

You've captured your character's voices very well.  Alice, from her vibrant personality, to Jasper and the internal conflict he struggles with every day.

Welcome to WT! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love writing from different narrative prespectives.  Each character is so different, it's like reading a new story through their eyes.  I'm glad you liked it. x



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