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I think this one is my favorite. It sums up everything Edward feels about himself and how hard he fights to keep from killing her.
Thank you! This was my fist attempt at EPoV, and nowadays, almost everything I write is from his perspective. It's nice to look back at this story. x
‘Forever,’ she whispers once more, and I sigh.
This is, quite possibly, my favorite line. I think it captures the essence of your story perfectly and I also think you did a wonderful job capturing Edward's thought. Great job.
Thank you! This was my first attempt at EPoV, but since then I've become addicted to writing from his perspective. I'm glad you liked it. x