Two halves of the whole, indeed. I loved Angelina's line about falling in love with the whole as well as the half.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks again for the review!
Ch. 3: As the Snow Falls // Resolution.
Reviews For As the Snow Falls
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:37 pm
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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:33 pm
Another gripping chapter. There's a few minor SPaG errors, but overall I think you've captured the grief and just a glimmer of hope beautifully.
Author's Response:
Hey again. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
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Ch. 2: Still Here.
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:28 pm
Welcome to WizardTales! The grief in this chapter is very evident - almost like you can reach up into the air and grab it. Great job!
Author's Response:
OMG. I got a review from Julie. I may die happily now.
j/k. I'm glad you like it. thanks for the review!
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Ch. 1: Mirrored Pain.