Reviews For As the Snow Falls

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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:37 pm

Two halves of the whole, indeed.  I loved Angelina's line about falling in love with the whole as well as the half.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks again for the review!




Ch. 3: As the Snow Falls // Resolution.
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:33 pm

Another gripping chapter.  There's a few minor SPaG errors, but overall I think you've captured the grief and just a glimmer of hope beautifully.



Author's Response:

Hey again. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

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Ch. 2: Still Here.
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
05/07/2009 03:28 pm

Welcome to WizardTales!  The grief in this chapter is very evident - almost like you can reach up into the air and grab it.  Great job!



Author's Response:

OMG. I got a review from Julie. I may die happily now.

j/k. I'm glad you like it. thanks for the review!

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Ch. 1: Mirrored Pain.
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