An interesting start. :) I really look forward to seeing more. It's fun seeing the story from Edward's PoV. Great job!
Thank you! I am glad that you liked it. It's fun being inside Edwrad's head!
This is a good short story. My questions is what was the prompt to write the story? Your story seemed to follow the book and thoughts that Edward had about leaving Bella. There was only one typo that you might want to fix: Paragraph 13 add the word "be" That would be the best ......
Jamye (Kristy's Mom)
Thank you , Jamye. I cannot believe I missed that!
I am a participant in the New Moon Book Club over on the WT forums. One of the prompts offered was 'regret' and this little plot bunny danced into my head one night. I thought that it was Edward's turn to have his thoughts/feelings be known about his decision to leave Bella and Forks.
Thank you for taking the time to read my story and leave a review.
Oooh! What an excellent start! I can't wait to be in Edward's head during the breakup.
Thank you, MM! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it thus far.
It's nice to see what's going on inside Edward's head. We saw the whole departure from Bella's perspective, but we didn't get much about what his thought process was.
Thank you, Julie!
I had fun writing this and being inside of Edward's head. I thought it was time for readers to get a glimpse of what he was thinking and going through since we know how Bella reacted.