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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/06/2009 11:26 am

I really enjoyed Neville's admission about his predjudice against Slytherin.  It's an honest and raw portrayal of the struggle that many people (even as readers here in the real world) seem to have when it comes to that particular house.

Great job!




Slytherin Qualities
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/06/2009 11:20 am

I can't say it enough:  you've got a talent for character development.  Your original characters fit very smoothly into canon.  Almost as though they had always been there but we just hadn't seen them.




The Riot Before Christmas
Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
03/30/2009 01:32 pm

I'm so glad to see that you've started submitting this story here.  It was always a pleasure to see your chapters in the queue elsewhere - even if I couldn't mod them.

You've got a gift with your characters.  They're OCs, but they fit so well into the Potterverse that it seems like they have always been a part of the world we've come to know.  Well done!  And welcome, again, to WT!




Four Houses, All Alike in Dignity
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