Hermione would be proud. Teddy's conversation as Flitwick with the house-elves was brilliant.
Oh my, pink hallways! Filch is not going to be happy about that! I like the way you're continuing to weave several generations of students through Hogwarts in subtle way.
An interesting turn of events! It looks like there is more than just a little trouble brewing for the ickle firsties.
I really enjoyed the revival of the DA. Neville' conversation with Teddy reveals so much about his personality - he's kind and compassionate and deeply marked by his experiences at the same age.
Ah, Filch and his beloved torture devices. Poor guy never really got a chance to use them, did he?
I'm absolutely intrigued by your plot. A wand thief on the loose at Hogwarts can only mean trouble!
Slughorn is such an amusing character! He kind of makes you want to retch and slap him at the same time, actually. Brilliant job on his characterization and his interaction with Teddy!
Excellent Quidditch match! I really enjoyed the way you wove together the action of the game itself and the other developing elements of the plot into one intriguing narrative.