Very interesting... I'm not quite sure what I think of the Teddy/Victoire relationship when it's clear that they end up together in canon, but I am enjoying the story. I really like your explanation for why Pansy acted the way she did in the Great Hall. Great work!
Yay for the return of the DA! I don't agree with Neville though, the Headmistress is pure evil in my opinion. I'm absolutely loving your story, this is brilliant!
I absolutely love Mercy! She gives Hufflepuff's a good name, makes me proud to be one myself :) I am so anxious to find out what happens in the meeting, I'm sure it will be great!
Yay! An uprising against the Headmistress. I really, really don't like that lady. I think both she and Neville were overreacting with Teddy being late, but that's just my opinion. I can't wait to see what the kids do!
Ophilia is a crazy, insane lunatic! How can she do something like that, isn't it illegal??? I'm glad about Teddy though, but now I'm wondering where he got the potion from...