This is just an absolutly wonderful story.  You develop you characters excellently and do an excellent job creating a plot you can say is entirely your own.  I loved this story so much I had to continue to read the second year on one of the other sites.

Thank you for putting your time into writing this wonderful story, and I can't wait to read more.

It's been a long time since I've been able to read fan fiction and really enjoy a story.  This one draws you in and keeps you interested at every turn!  It's a refreshing plot with well developed characters and entertainment at every turn.

Well done!

Your description of Alexandra's essay was incredibly funny!  Overall, this was  a delightful chapter to read, and I found myself laughing in more than one place.

Outstanding job!