I'm so glad you decided to submit this to WT! I like the way you've begun to develop characters that we haven't seen as much of in canon and made them human. I especially enjoyed the way you've portrayed Ernie and Neville not just as their stereotyped characters from the books.
Well done!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you recommended this site. I really like Neville - I like how he's grown up through the books. As for Ernie, I really fell in love with the Ernie portrayed in thanfiction's work, and adopted him and have tried to flesh out his and Susan's story in more detail. I hope people enjoy them. Thanks for your help as well on the advice for uploading future chapters and other stories. I'm looking forward to getting more up here soon.
Chapter 1 - Return to Hogwarts