Oooh. What's gonna happen next? This is really well written. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter! I am working on the second chapter as I type this. A portion has already been reviewed by my beta and I am incorporating some changes. I hope to have it ready by the end of this week.
Thank you for the compliment. I believe we are our own worst critic.
~Lacey