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Reviewer: Gmariam (Signed)
03/29/2009 01:23 pm

Wonderful job! You write with such beautiful language and emotion. I loved how you examined Snape's feelings through these flashbacks; my only suggestion would be to make the flashbacks longer and really get more into the scenes with Mary, Charity, and even Dumbledore, since you wrote them so well I wanted to read more.  But I know that probably wasn't your intent: the short vignettes worked nicely too. The candles tying everything together were fantastic. You really understand this character and write very well! ~Gina :)




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Reviewer: Snapes Talon (Signed)
02/27/2009 05:46 pm
The passage that sticks out the most in my mind are the candles, how well you describe the setting and your deft handling of Severus. Just lovely!

Author's Response:

I'd never have guessed you liked the candles. ;o)

And you know I'm still flattered that you think I can handle Severus, given how much how you write him shaped my fandom view of him in the first place.




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