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Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
02/23/2009 02:50 am

Fantastic writing - you made the character of Ariana come to life, as well as showing us the trouble Neville had at Hogwarts. 

I love the way you were able to create the 'feel' of being on the run, even if they were just hiding out in one place.

I bet Dumbledore's portrait was very sad at the goings-on at his school.

Awesome story.




Fortifying the Keep
Reviewer: CrysCullen (Signed)
02/21/2009 10:40 pm

This is EXACTLY how I imagined it! Well, written, as always!




Fortifying the Keep
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