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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
02/17/2009 09:13 pm

I love the imagery you provide throughout the entire chapter, but I especially love the first few paragraphs.  They truly grabbed my attention.  Great job!




Chapter 1 The Dream
Reviewer: CrysCullen (Signed)
02/16/2009 05:56 pm

Ooh. Poor Cho. I don't know how she'd deal with something like that...




Chapter 1 The Dream
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