I love the imagery you provide throughout the entire chapter, but I especially love the first few paragraphs. They truly grabbed my attention. Great job!
Reviews For He's Gone, Cho, He's Gone
Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
02/17/2009 09:13 pm
Chapter 1 The Dream
Reviewer: CrysCullen (Signed)
02/16/2009 05:56 pm
Ooh. Poor Cho. I don't know how she'd deal with something like that...
Chapter 1 The Dream