I'm looking forward to more character development for Cody. :)
I think this is a nice beginning to what could easily become a great story. I'm excited to see where you take it. :)
This story is definitely well-written. I like your style, and so far, I even like your OC, Cody. That takes a lot! I'm intruigued by her - where did she come from, why did she stay away from Quidditch so long? I assume you're witholding information on purpose, and I will look forward to the continuation of this story!
Again, neatly done! I like the personal interplay between Cho, Roger and Cody, and I like that Cho is happy in her job. I think this is the first fic in a long time where I've liked Cho Chang!
I look forward to seeing more from you!