I'm looking forward to more character development for Cody. :)

I think this is a nice beginning to what could easily become a great story. I'm excited to see where you take it. :)

This story is definitely well-written.  I like your style, and so far, I even like your OC, Cody.  That takes a lot!  I'm intruigued by her - where did she come from, why did she stay away from Quidditch so long?  I assume you're witholding information on purpose, and I will look forward to the continuation of this story!

Again, neatly done!  I like the personal interplay between Cho, Roger and Cody, and I like that Cho is happy in her job.  I think this is the first fic in a long time where I've liked Cho Chang!

I look forward to seeing more from you!