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Reviewer: Gmariam (Signed)
03/24/2009 07:45 pm

Very nice! I've read this scene before, and even written it myself, and I enjoyed reading yours. The teasing at the end was good, I think that there would be a lot of laughter in their relationship, starting from the beginning. Good job! ~Gina :)




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Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
01/15/2009 11:46 am

I liked this little missing moment story.  It's cute, and it's sweet, and I think you've captured Harry's feelings of happiness and relief very well.  The only thing I wonder about is the "Will you be my girlfriend?" question.  Maybe I'm too far out of high school...do people still ask that question?



Author's Response: You know, I have no idea! When I asked Jon (yes, I was the one who asked him) I did ask if he would be my boyfriend, so it seemed natural for me to use that in this story. Maybe I'm out of the loop too! :D



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