Wierd twist, can't wait to see where this goes. Toad Cliffy FTW
Author's Response:
I never really mean to leave cliffhangers, but I always seem to! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
CH 1: Return to Privet Drive
Reviews For Harry Potter and the Unforgiven
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/19/2009 04:00 pm
Author's Response:
Reviewer: cts (Signed)
01/18/2009 06:31 pm
An excellent start; I find the characterization excellent, and the starting tension makes me eager to continue. Excellent job.
Author's Response:
Coming from you, 'excellent characterization' is high praise! Thanks for reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Prologue: Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: Hermione_Weasley (Signed)
01/17/2009 08:32 pm
Wow, very intriguing. I cannot wait to read more of this. This will go in my favorite stories so that I can get updates.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'll get more posted soon.
Prologue: Sibling Rivalry
Reviewer: cb11 (Signed)
01/15/2009 01:34 am
Excellent beginning to a story. You make it sound like this is posted somewhere else, but i haven't read any before so i will give my fresh opinion:
You start of great, leaving the reader already trying to figure something out within the first few paragraphs. You are also leading us along with anticipation about something, but not quite enough info to figure it out. Since this is Harry/Ginny ship, i can guess where this might be going, but im not really sure.
Either way, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
I hope I'm not too predictable!
Thank you very much for the review - and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Prologue: Sibling Rivalry