Such a refreshing read! You've done a great job of drawing the reader in to the world you're writing about.
ANGELA!!!! I love Angela and Im glad you included the old brod. I really enjoy this story your imagination is on track with the original author and this story could easily be part of the series. I really hope you finish uploading this.
I am really impressed so far with this story, I can't wait to move onto the next chapter. I am however concerned with the fact that there are only 2 chapters and your opening remarks stated that the story was lengthy can complete. I hope you will continue adding the chapters.
Great chapter! I'm a little concerned about the potrayal of the Riders as rulers...it seems just a little bit off. Everytime I start thinking that, however, you say something that changes my mind! I'm really intruiged by this story and have recommended it on the forums!
I will be very interested to see where you are going with this story. I'm always interested in the origins of fictional bad guys (and real life ones, too), and the reasons they end up doing the horrible things they do. So far, this fic looks exceptionally well-written and well-planned. I'll look forward to more!