I loved the last part where they are exploring each others memories, it was beautiful and touching.
Good job with the details and the ceremony. I did think the eggs hatched a bit to quickly though but since Eragon didn't sit down with his like this then maybe that is why Saphira took longer to hatch.
Wow. I wasn't prepared for the violence of the Riders' reactions to Galbatorix's ancestry. It seems a little at odds with what I know of Brom and Oromis from canon, to be honest. However, it does explain the dragon attack. It was Glaedr, wasn't it?