Wow, great chapter. Lots of emotion, good action, humour (woot! lol), and all very well written, Enjoying muchly, can't wait for more!
*wide eyes* Duuuuuuuude , , , Now that's new! Man, that sucks for Bella! Poor puppy. This is getting uber interesting. Can't wait to read more!
Arg! Update!!!!!!! *grins sheepishly* Sorry. I'm just so caught up in this now!
oh this is great. i love your little version of their after all the books. i cant wait for the next instalment.
this is a great start and a good continuation of the actual story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
What a great start! Get more of this fic of, because I want to see what happens at school!!!