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Reviewer: butter_beer_drinker (Signed)
03/31/2009 11:48 pm

Great start, it seems like you just picked up where the last chapter of Brisingr left off.  I love the interaction between Eragon and Roran but it would have been nice of him to tell Roran what happened.  You did a great job of showing his inner turmoil and I liked the "voice" in his head but it just ended, you could have continued it more through the chapter, espically when he thought of Arya.  My only question, where is Saphira?

Please continue soon, I would love to see how this plays out.




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Reviewer: ElusiveEvan (Signed)
01/16/2009 04:18 pm

That was a fairly nice read! I can't wait for the rest of it. Brilliant portrayal of Roran, absolutely great!




Chapter 1
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