Author's Response: Thanks -- btw, I originally had all the numbers written out but it looked wordy so I changed it. Anyway -- sorry for the spam influx of chapter/stories (I wasn't sure if it was max 5 per story or 5 in total). The rest of the chapters are up at FFnet if you're interested in reading ahead. Also, I realise that there are grammatical errors, but as I don't have a beta I was planning on finishing the story first before going back and editing. Otherwise, thanks for the review! I'm glad that it was finally posted on Wizard Tales.