Nice bit of fluff. I liked how you have captured these two moments in such few words.
I'm glad you liked it! I think it's one of my favorites. Thanks!
Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. When you have to fit everything into exactly 500 words, there are a bunch of things you have to leave out, so it can be hard to do sometimes.
I actually have not read much Lily/James fiction, but I'm glad that The Taste of Quidditch was able to give you a breath of fresh air. :)
I really enjoyed reading this short piece. It's well written and professionally presented. It's always a challenge to tell a good story in few words, and you managed to explore the gentle experiences of new love without becoming overly sentimental. Good characterization and nice job all around! GaiaRhiannon
Thanks for your encouraging words! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story.