Nice bit of fluff. I liked how you have captured these two moments in such few words.
Author's Response:
Hi, Ham!
I'm glad you liked it! I think it's one of my favorites. Thanks!
--IEG
Author's Response:
nana_banana_xx3--
Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. When you have to fit everything into exactly 500 words, there are a bunch of things you have to leave out, so it can be hard to do sometimes.
I actually have not read much Lily/James fiction, but I'm glad that The Taste of Quidditch was able to give you a breath of fresh air. :)
Thanks!
--IEG
I really enjoyed reading this short piece. It's well written and professionally presented. It's always a challenge to tell a good story in few words, and you managed to explore the gentle experiences of new love without becoming overly sentimental. Good characterization and nice job all around! GaiaRhiannon
Author's Response:
GaiaRhiannon--
Thanks for your encouraging words! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story.
--IEG