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Reviewer: belezza (Signed)
06/21/2007 02:38 am

I loved your style. It was very snape like. Also, I think that it really made the story interesting. In addition, I think that you included every thought that Snape probably had about the Marauders. 10/10

-Ashley



Chapter One: Detention With Pomona (Severus)
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Reviewer: GaiaRhiannon (Signed)
06/20/2007 09:27 pm

This is an excellently-written and intriguing chapter, with a creative change in POV.  The characters and dialogue are "right on" and very believable.  Congratulations on the first chapter and I'll be looking forward to reading Snape's version next!  Well done!  GaiaRhiannon



Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you're enjoying it so far. :D

Chapter One: Detention With Pomona (Sirius)
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