I really liked this story...I hope there's more to come...a lot of people don't like Ginny/Draco, but I love it!!! more to come? well, lovies and more Cori!
I think this has been a pretty good story so far. I really like the way you're telling the story, but I find myself wondering if Ginny would really fall for Draco so easily. It seems to me that aside from the physical attraction, the main reason she likes him is because she feels sorry for him. While I think that would be a valid reason to have some feelings for someone, I don't think that's really the right sort of foundation for a romantic relationship.
Anyway, regardless of the relationship between Ginny and Draco, I've found myself drawn into your story by the way you've set up the situation for all of the characters. It's very believable for me that Draco would find himself in this situation - at the mercy of the Order - with the path he's on.
Keep writing! :)
Still not sure if I like Draco...but then again, I've got six books of prejudice against his character locked up in my head ;)
Even if I don't like him, you've got me feeling kind of bad for him. You're completely right - his life is over, since both the Order and the Death Eaters want him dead. I wonder how things will turn out? Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: But, but Draco is the best! He is in for a rough go of things...
I like the way you build suspense with Ron's *You'll see*s. (How like an older brother, by the way.)
I like the way you describe Ginny vis a vis Harry, strewing about the telltale signs of a soured relationship.
Love her feelings for Ron--a lot of awwww moments there.
And the challenge of making Draco likeable--I think you'll convince me.
Thank you so much. I do hope that I can convince you that Draco is worthy of being liked!