This story is well written and entertaining, but I stopped reading at chapter 26, as I finally realized that Harry and Ginny were not going to end up together, and I didn't want to see any other outcome.

 I was hoping that Luci would turn out to be either half veela or to have used a love potion on Harry. I thought Harry was looking rather shallow to just move on to someone else so easily.

But, keep up the good work. 

Hi Sunny, I just love that everywhere I go I find my fave story. This is great. You should have tons of readers by now. I am work now and amazed that I can even visit a fic site. Shhh I wont tell. Keep writing

Love ya!

Edy

Yes... you wanted me to elaborate about Ron...

Well.. you seem to get Ron's character bang on at times. He is a bit clumsy with his words, a bit brash, very easily provoked and funloving most of the times.

You seemed to get him right in some scenes.. and in others he just seemed off. I expected more friction between him and Draco.. which was noticeably absent. He also was oddly very mature at times and then he regressed back to being a prat in other scenes. It just seemed that you weren't very consistentwith his character.. that's all.

It's really nothing major.. minor stuff, really. But when you are a good writer then you have to work on the minor stuff to get even better. :)

Uh-oh... even with Voldemort dead the secrets aren't over it seems. Very good chapter.

...And is it just me or are the Dumbledore's all very annoying at times. Must be a family trait.

Good old Sirius.. ever so funloving and predictable.

I liked the chapter.. but it was sort of... subdued..

Harry got back his godfather... somebody he is very close to... and there was no excitement, no strong emotions, nothing. It was like 'Oh, Sirius is back. Jolly good.'

One of the things you need to learn is how to build up to situations, create tension, even go deeper into emotions of characters. So far only Luci and Harry were well developed.. You baely scratched the surface of the other characters.

Your writing is good in other aspects.. but this is one area you can improve in. :)

I was kinda disappointed about how Voldemort died... I mean Harry waking up in bed and Luci telling him about it... they don't even know what killed him. It sort of came off as a damp squib. It's just that the final battle should have been more exciting.

Apart from that the rest of the chapter was fairly decent.