Great start for your story! I hope you continue it.
Poor Harry. It looks like Voldemort has discovered Ginny and Harry's feelings for her anyway. It does surprise me that Voldemort would be able to see anything through Harry's eyes and him awake - especially Ginny. I would think that Harry's feelings for Ginny would be so strong that Voldemort would be unable to stand it. Think of that moment in the MoM when Voldemort tried to possess Harry.
I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more. Thank you for sharing with us.