This wasn't the end of the story. It was an April Fool's joke. However, the joke seems to be on me, since WT is now broken and I can't add more chapters or edit the existing ones.
The story continues, and I'm halfway done with chapter 18. I'd love to post it here, but it seems that WT isn't really concerned with its broken-ness, so you'll hae to go to that other popular fanfic site to read it. Email me if you have questions.
If anyone else is out there, I hope you get this message, too.
I am hooked too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
hey...you had me hooked since i started 'the ring of gold'...and yet this is my first review, sorry, but thats partly your fault, since i just had to keep reading! =D i intend to make up for that though.
good job..!! i cant wait for the next chapter...*hint hint* =)
Author's Response: Yes, we all really enjoyed the Moon Princess. It's very sad. What the story really needs is someone who will make out with every character at random times. Oh well, perhaps the next story.
Author's Response: Err... It was great? I hope that you're joking about that...
I was really confused (slightly amused by the Moon Princess character) for awhile and was wondering how I could tactfully ask you just what was going on then I realized what the date was.
I assume you mean the setting change to a ship? Huh. I didn't really think about it that way. Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And +2 points to you for managing to use 'aplomb' correctly and without sounding like you were trying to use it correctly.
I can't immediately confirm (as Gozer is fictional and I don't have the Ghostbusters transcript around), but Eridu is a very influential city in early Sumer and plays a strong role in their religion.
This is not a coincidence.