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Reviewer: myownmuggle (Signed)
04/08/2009 07:27 pm

Poor Percy!  Success can be so very lonely.  You've captured his character beautifully, and his reaction to Charlie being Penelope's date was spot on. 

I hope we'll be seeing more of you back here at WT as this was simply outstanding.

~ Julie (WT Mod Squad)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Julie!  I do have a few other things I might post.... Thanks for reviewing!



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Reviewer: Hera Malfoy (Signed)
06/17/2007 02:17 pm
Poor Percy. He has everything he has ever wantedd. Ironicly, none of it matters.

Author's Response:

I know...I was always afraid that was exactly how Percy would end up.  I guess canon gave him a second chance, though!



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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/16/2007 07:29 pm
An amazing story.  I love how you depicted Percy's life.  It seems as though he has it all but he really doesn't have very much does he?  Makes me feel sorry for him.  Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you; I always felt sorry for him, too.  He just seemed to be trying SO hard to get away from the untidiness of his upbringing, but he shut himself out of the good stuff, as well. 



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Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
04/05/2007 06:56 pm
Excellent peice.  Good use of Percy as an unreliable narrator.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  What a great piece of feedback; I really appreciate it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.



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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
04/02/2007 06:33 pm
A fine sketch of a sad, sad young man.  You contrast his life with his family's so well.  I can see the sneer on his lips.  I also like the way you have his flat looking out onto both the magical and mundane worlds.  He gets to look down on just about everyone, doesn't he?  And the servile position of kneeling to Head-Floo Penny. And Penny's  chic hoop earrings and stiletto heels.  Poor pathetic Percy. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this great review.  I really appreciate the way you notice details, and I'm glad you thought they worked.  Thank you for taking the time to make such thoughtful comments.  --Strider

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