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Reviewer: Lantis222 (Signed)
07/14/2007 11:00 am

Hi! Wow, you never really think about what Cho went through that night and into the next day. Thanks for writing such a good story. Are you going to write anything else? you definately should, you are quite talented.

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Thanks for reviewing my story. 



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Reviewer: capella_black (Signed)
05/03/2007 11:52 pm
That was really sad! I loved the descriptions of her physical reactions, they were so vivid, especially the bit about her mouth tasting like metal. I just wonder why nobody stayed out there to talk to her after the task ended. The end was the best though, I definitely got a little choked up when she carved his name in the tree. Well done!

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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
04/02/2007 06:35 pm

You give me a really strong sense of what it's like to lose your dearest love suddenly, without warning.  Every symptom from the nausea to the pain to the tears made me feel what Cho was going through.

And I love the ending.  A fitting monument.  And a healing gesture.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. It made my day! After a really bad day, that really made me happy. Thanks again!

 

-Ashley



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