Hermione actually asked him out after taking off points and giving him detention? I wonder what he'll do now. It's sure to be exciting at any rate.
Can we hope to see more chapters soon?
lots and lots!
posted to chapter 21 now :) enjoy
I was very impressed by the Potions lesson scene. You obviously have given a lot of thought to it and put in some very vivid and detailed descriptions.
Overall, a wonderful chapter.
I loved the whole battle scene.. you obviously are very talented at writing action scenes. So far it has been a thrilling read.
I also liked Harry and Hermione's interaction. I gotta say its great to see Harry being so smart in thisfic. I like it when he's able to keep up with Hermione and potentially even surpass her.
I really liked the meeting with Raypirnk. So many subtle undertones to it.
I also thought the scene in Borgins shop was masterfully written. You are beginning to hook me into the fic.
I really like Serion's character.
Oh another Portkey person..yay!
I LOVE this story, really I do. It's fantastic the way you've done the whole EvilTwin thing and still have Harry come out smelling like a rose!
Keep up the wonderful writing!