Not over yet

Go Harry - I wonder how much is about to be revealed to Dumbledore and Hermione?

This story is moving fast, and I love it - great writing.

Good for Hermione!

Now, I wonder what Dumbledore will think, given that Daniel is telling the tale...

And go Harry - pwn Voldemort!

Oh no!  Hermione's hurt, Harry's worried - and how is it Dumbledore doesn't know what's going on?  Your story is addictive.

Nice teenage groping scene!  I love how Harry deflected Hermione - though, I think it's going to get him in trouble later.

Ya gotta love a twisted mind

Uh oh!  Smart girl is smart - and Harry might be in some trouble this time.  I wonder how many secrets he's about to reveal...

Whoa!  I wonder if they'll know it was hiim?  Very daring escape and very daring raid.  I hope the result is worth it!

Now there's a twist.

And now Dumbledore dies, Voldemort AK's Harry and everyone lives happily ever after because Harry doesn't die. Not likely, but it'll be fun reading how you've written your ending.