Not over yet
Go Harry - I wonder how much is about to be revealed to Dumbledore and Hermione?
This story is moving fast, and I love it - great writing.
Good for Hermione!
Now, I wonder what Dumbledore will think, given that Daniel is telling the tale...
And go Harry - pwn Voldemort!
Oh no! Hermione's hurt, Harry's worried - and how is it Dumbledore doesn't know what's going on? Your story is addictive.
Nice teenage groping scene! I love how Harry deflected Hermione - though, I think it's going to get him in trouble later.
Ya gotta love a twisted mind
Uh oh! Smart girl is smart - and Harry might be in some trouble this time. I wonder how many secrets he's about to reveal...
Whoa! I wonder if they'll know it was hiim? Very daring escape and very daring raid. I hope the result is worth it!
And now Dumbledore dies, Voldemort AK's Harry and everyone lives happily ever after because Harry doesn't die. Not likely, but it'll be fun reading how you've written your ending.