I'm glad I went looking for other fan fiction sites to see what might be posted there. I love the way you've started your story and just hope Harry can find someone to share the journey with.
On to the next chapter.
rdgale
I'm glad I went looking for other fan fiction sites to see what might be posted there. I love the way you've started your story and just hope Harry can find someone to share the journey with.
On to the next chapter.
rdgale
Harry's worried about Hermione thinking he's dark - but he is edging perilously close to it, I think.
Dangerous road, that.
You know, 'tis of some note that animals trust him; I think that shows his inner nature - and the fact he's a predator at heart. A hunter of some kind. I like your take on Occlumency imagery; different than I've seen before.
Fairly tame - but good revelations. Interesting interactions with Kreacher!
Yep. Saw that coming; the pain and anguish in Harry would have attracted Voldemort like a fly to honey...
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what his form is, though I have my suspicions.
Interesting. Now Dumbledore is paying attention and thinking through things; I wonder what it will mean now that he knows Harry's not the weak twin? I wonder if he'll actually figure out what's going on with Daniel?
Whoa.
That was powerful; impressive, writing, especially when Harry unleashed all his suffering on Voldemort and Dumbledore. I wonder if Dumbledore will actually try now, or if he'll continue as he always has?
depends entirely upon Dumbledore's motives... haha you'll see why later
You have me very intrigued; normally, I just turn off at the idea of time travel, but so far, you're doing it well.
I'm off to read the next!
This was a great story. It made exactly as much sense as Illuminatus, and I'm not sure which was more fun to read. Are you planning a version of the second future?
Who writes Illuminatus? I'm told UH reminds a lot of people of Stephen King's Dark Tower.
Amazing - and action packed. I should be goin to bed...but I'm going to read what happens next.
And cuckolded husband, huh? That does NOT bode well for the future. Not at all...I wonder if it's a Marauder, or someone else?