While this pairing isn't what I normally read, I wanted to commend you on a job well done. You've done an excellent job with both the dialog an the descriptive parts - setting, emotions, actions, etc. I know your bio says you're Italian,, but I have problems believing that English isn't your first language. You've done such a wonderful job bringing this story to life.
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