ok...u know what would be a good twist on all time-turner fics? authors putting little segments of there current time....like if the people from the past start remembering sttuff they never even knew about and stuff...like get a future-pensive like thing that shows hermione what wilol happen if he chooses this choice, or that choice. thatd be cool...dont hate lily...she gave harry his eyes...

Another great chapter!

Keep writing!

Haha, I loved the “I didn’t mean a could-you-repeat-what-you-said what; I meant a what-do-you-think-you’re-saying what!” throughout the story.  I also really liked the line where one of the Marauders is talking about Snape's hair and he says it's full of 'oil and potential'.

All in all, another great chapter!  I do have to wonder, though, things can't go perfectly from here on out, can they?  Remus and Lily are still somehow connected into this weird convoluted love square, so I'm really anxious to see the next installment! 

I really loved this line: “Just remember to be yourself — your more sensitive self, that is.”

I thought this chapter had the right amount of humor and drama in it that they each balanced each other out and made it very enjoyable to read.  The relationships you've got between the characters are so sad!  Poor James, Hermione, and Remus...none of them are having any luck with their love lives, are they? :)

I think I caught a line about halfway through your story that was a play on your name; you mentioned something like, "The cold sky opened up and torrents poured from the heavens." Rain from heave?  Ha, could just me being overly analytical about these things.

Anyway, I hope you don't let the few reviews you've received keep you from writing - I would love to see this story completed and I'm sure many other people would too.