Reviews For My Constant

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Reviewer: shivi (Signed)
06/13/2008 08:36 am
i absolutely love your story and am begging you to please post chapter 9 and rest of the chapters on quickly i really cant wait

Chapter Eight
Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
06/10/2007 11:17 pm
I liked the newspaper headlines :D

Author's Response: LOL, thanks...well, we need some humour sometimes, right? ;)

Chapter Six
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/09/2007 09:48 pm
I can really feel Lily's hurt in this and James's support.  you sense the toll of exhaustion the war is taking on all of them.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's exactly what I tried for.

Chapter Five
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
06/09/2007 09:46 pm

Divination, however, has never been my strong point.--LOL

This is a much more mature James and Lily than I'm accustomed to reading about.  It's usually the supercilious, selfish James and carping, self-righteous Lily of years 4 thru 6, or the cooing married-with-baby James and Lily.  I'm glad to see you bridging the gap. 

Author's Response: Thanks. I really did try to make them seem more mature, because in times of war, things are difficult for everyone, including the kids, and everyone grows mentally and emotionally beyond their physical ages.

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