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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
08/10/2007 04:30 am
awwww, that's no fair!!!


Two Weeks Too Late.
Reviewer: The_Quibbler (Signed)
04/01/2007 09:00 pm
GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @(~.~)@~~~~()~~~()~~@


The Leaky Cauldron
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
03/19/2007 03:23 pm
Ahh. I hate cliffhanger endings... Update soon!


02 - It's My Day Off!
Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
03/19/2007 03:15 pm

Nice beginning. I can't wait to see where this one goes.

 




The Leaky Cauldron
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/16/2007 01:43 pm
I'm glad you didn't kills Hedwig, but I'm curious to see where you're trying to go with this.


02 - It's My Day Off!
Reviewer: Jayiin (Signed)
03/16/2007 11:53 am
Lots of mysteries; lots of questions.  Good work!


The Leaky Cauldron
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
03/16/2007 06:35 am

I like your description of the city, and the idea of Ginny reading the paper in Kensington Gardens.  She's adapted to Mundane life well.  And her reason for reading Muggle newspapers in the first place was wistful and sad and thought-provoking.

Harry's insight into the difficulties of getting back into training when he's been away from school so long struck a particularly familiar chord here.    

And what's up with Hedwig? 

I hope you'll update soon.




02 - It's My Day Off!
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
03/16/2007 06:27 am

You introduce us to this slice of Harry's history very subtly with that bar of soap, and you highlight Ginny's personality deftly in her reading material. 

You intrigued me with the mention of the 'gray eyes' that irritate Ginny so.  I can't wait to hear that story.

I like subtle writing that develops relationships slowly. 

 Thanks.




The Leaky Cauldron
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