Reviews For After Apocalypse

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Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
07/16/2007 03:30 am

Hey Cyborg,

I thought this chapter was written well.  I liked the weird creepiness of Timmy and I also thought the idea of wandering through a deserted and ruined Diagon Alley was pretty sweet.  Hopefully we'll learn more soon - keep writing!



The Alley
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Reviewer: angelrosieMD (Anonymous)
04/29/2007 10:34 am
great story, love it.

Author's Response: Thank you.

A Not-so-good Friday
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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/24/2007 09:06 am
Another great chapter.  A little bit of background on Ben.  I also enjoyed the description of the marble game.  The idea that the boys would scramble and push food off the table for marbles was wonderful.  Great job!

Author's Response: Yes... background. Ben sure has lots of background. Lots of it.

Good Samaritan
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Reviewer: Buttamellow (Signed)
04/24/2007 09:03 am
A wonderful beginning to a story. I love your characterization.  You bring your OCs to life and make them seem so believable.  I also enjoy how you took the HP universe and 'made it your own'.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not very happy with the length of it, and it may go under major revision if I have time in the future.

Exile
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