Will we ever find out what happened to Ollivander?
After reading BOTH of your Stories... (at FF dot NET) I must say I can't wait to see what you brew up next.
Just wanted to let you know I'm enjoying the this story. The character of Jason is a unique perspective, in fact I'm picturing Jim Carevel as Jason. I hadn't realized I read one of your other stories, until a notice was sent that you are posting Source on Fiction Alley.
I have seen a few spelling errors, such as expect versus except.
Kudos for writing another long fan fiction. :)
Thanks for your review, Mara. I'm glad you are enjoying it. You are very welcome to notify me of any typos/errors you come across, so I can correct them.
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Oh my god, that dressing-down of Umbridge at the end of your story was amazing. Anyone who's ever read the books has always, always wanted to see that woman taken down a peg. Somehow, reading about her being taken away by a bunch of centaurs wasn't satisfying enough, but McGonagall's sweet revenge/welcome speech hit the spot, I think.
I'm not sure if I've mentioned it yet, but your story seems to have an unusually well-thought out plot so far. Hope to see more!
Thanks for the review and positive comments.
Yes, one of the pleasures of writing a fic is giving the likes of Umbridge, their just deserts ... stay tuned ... it ain't over till the fat lady sings (as they say)