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Reviewer: Kilian (Anonymous)
02/27/2007 08:04 am
I loved this sytory from beginning to end, although I have to admit that the first chapter was a bit weak and I almost stopped at that point. I especially loved the dialogue with the British Prime Minister and McGonagall's treatment of the ministry.


Epilogue
Reviewer: Treck (Signed)
02/26/2007 04:46 pm

Will we ever find out what happened to Ollivander?

After reading BOTH of your Stories... (at FF dot NET) I must say I can't wait to see what you brew up next.

Treck




Epilogue
Reviewer: Mara727 (Anonymous)
02/23/2007 06:20 pm

Just wanted to let you know I'm enjoying the this story. The character of Jason is a unique perspective, in fact I'm picturing Jim Carevel as Jason.  I hadn't realized I read one of your other stories, until a notice was sent that you are posting Source on Fiction Alley.

I have seen a few spelling errors, such as expect versus except.

Kudos for writing another long fan fiction. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, Mara.  I'm glad you are enjoying it.  You are very welcome to notify me of any typos/errors you come across, so I can correct them.

Either mention them in a review or email me at: abe2412@yahoo.co.nz




Chapter 16 ~ The Enchanted Cave
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/17/2007 10:14 pm
I enjoyed this chapter very much.  Your ideas about time travel are intriguing, and you explain them so that it is easy to follow your logic.  Also, making the explanation as part of a conversaton is much more palatable--in fact, enjoyable.  You added a little humor at Ron's expense, but then his naivety is what we all know and love him for.  I'll be very interested to see how you handle the dream reality in the next chapter.  It won't be easy, I'm sure, but given that you already covered a very abstruse topic in a detailed, but not labored way, I imagine you will make it equally believable and enjoyable.


Chapter 12 ~ Rowena Ravenclaw’s Wand
Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
02/11/2007 10:46 pm

Oh my god, that dressing-down of Umbridge at the end of your story was amazing.  Anyone who's ever read the books has always, always wanted to see that woman taken down a peg.  Somehow, reading about her being taken away by a bunch of centaurs wasn't satisfying enough, but McGonagall's sweet revenge/welcome speech hit the spot, I think.

 

I'm not sure if I've mentioned it yet, but your story seems to have an unusually well-thought out plot so far.  Hope to see more! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and positive comments.

Yes, one of the pleasures of writing a fic is giving the likes of Umbridge, their just deserts ... stay tuned ... it ain't over till the fat lady sings (as they say)




Chapter 6 ~ The Mole from the Ministry of Magic
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