Surprising Encounters
Reviews For Discovering the Forgotten
Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
06/25/2007 12:16 pm
I liked Hera's reaction to Neville and also how she pretends to know what a Death Eater is :D
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
05/06/2007 10:10 am
This is fun. I love Mr. Mump--and of course Greta. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more about Hera. (My last name is Ellis, so I feel a special bond.)
Of Worried Aunts, Waggling Brows and First Wands
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/03/2007 12:11 pm
I like this very much, but I'm a little confused. Has Hera always known her mother was a witch? It's a little hard to tell. Sometimes your economical style--which is actually a very good thing, most of the time--may have kept you from telling the story clearly in this case.
Author's Response: Hera finds out that her mother's a witch in the first chapter. I thought that was clear, but I'll try and fix it. Thanks for the review:)
Author's Response: Hera finds out that her mother's a witch in the first chapter. I thought that was clear, but I'll try and fix it. Thanks for the review:)
The Forgotten
Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/03/2007 12:07 pm
This is so exciting. You get right to the point with a minimum of verbiage. Please update soon. You have me rooting for Hera. She seems a very strong person--though not a Mary Sue by any means.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Curiosity Killed the Cat