I like this very much, but I'm a little confused. Has Hera always known her mother was a witch? It's a little hard to tell. Sometimes your economical style--which is actually a very good thing, most of the time--may have kept you from telling the story clearly in this case.
Author's Response: Hera finds out that her mother's a witch in the first chapter. I thought that was clear, but I'll try and fix it. Thanks for the review:)
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