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Reviewer: hp_fangal (Signed)
04/03/2007 01:14 am
“It’s simple when you're using your brain, Ron,” Fred said.

I think that's my favorite line in this chapter. Anyway, I love how you've planned this all out. The connections are so clever that you overlook the solution all too easily; it's brilliant! When Cush said that the answer to breaking the curse was in the curse, I spent a good amount of time looking over the information you had provided so far, but I hadn't quite reached the conclusion. Very good work! I love this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you again!  It really inspires me when I get reviews like this.  So, thank you! I can't thank you enough. As for the solution to the Curse...  it is in the curse itself, but whether Hermione was right or not...  will be revealed in the next chapters...   so I hope you keep reading.  *impish grin*



Duel
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Reviewer: hp_fangal (Signed)
03/29/2007 09:30 pm
... Wow. This was a pretty intense chapter. I loved it, especially that scene with Ron and the twins. And I have an intense love of AU stories; they're so fascinating when you consider the "what-ifs" of a decision, or go all out and change almost everything. I've evern read an AU that took place in a world under the rule of an immortal emperor where wizards are in control. Anyway, I loved this chapter, and I'm very excited for the next one.

Resistance
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Reviewer: hp_fangal (Signed)
03/26/2007 02:26 am
So, for a long time I ignored this story whenever it was updated, and then I decided to take a chance this evening. You have not disappointed. This story is so intriguing that I just kept reading until I realized that there wasn't a next chapter yet. Very good work! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  The next chapters are on the way.  ~Six~

Intervention
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Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
03/23/2007 12:38 am

lol at:

"You're just jealous because Ron chose me!" Harry spat.

"Listen to yourself! You sound like a bloody girl!" Hermione cried. 



Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I rather had fun with this--and the next chapters as far as dialogue is concerned.  Thanks for your continuous patronage!

Encounter
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Reviewer: VacantSkies (Signed)
02/24/2007 03:27 pm

Wow, that was a cool ending line.  Like something out of a movie!

I like how you're portraying all of the characters so far - especially Ron and Harry.  A lot of authors like to make their eleven year old characters either very dumb or far too intelligent, but I think you've struck a perfect balance between the two.  You've also added a sense of innocence and naivete to them that I think captures the feeling of being a kid.  I think everyone can remember back to their childhood when the answers to everything were so simple and you just wanted to make things right all the time.

Your storytelling is fantastic - I'm tearing through your chapters (and I'm glad there's more to come) at a rapid clip and I'm just completely drawn into the world you've created here. 

Also, send my compliments to your beta readers!  I haven't seen any errors at all, which is quite a rare feat in the world of fanfic.  All of you guys are doing an outstanding job with working on this story!



Author's Response: Thank you for this overwhelming review!  It delights me to know that my work is not overlooked.  Not many people like AU stories, especially if it's more AU than canon.  So, thank you for your open-mindedness, and your very kind words about the story.  I have forwarded your Kudos to my Beta-Readers.  Hope you continue reading the story--there's more to come.  ~SIX~

Name Me Not
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