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Reviewer: Alessandra (Anonymous)
04/19/2007 12:08 pm
This is a really little piece of story. Ispecially enjoyed Harry's vision of being among black and red haired people. You wrote a wonderfully portrait of what Harry's emotions would be before he gets his ticket to freedom.


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Reviewer: Spiderwort (Signed)
02/20/2007 12:13 pm

Love your choice of a song--though the opening 'It was so dull in town...' starts with a man singing, not a woman.

Harry's understanding of his plight is quite perceptive for one so young--but then he's had a lot of time to think in that prison under the stairs, hasn't he?

The first book has always been an emotional favorite of mine, and your story brought the feelings I had when i first read it.

Thanks, Calamur.

 




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Reviewer: mugglenet27 (Signed)
11/23/2006 11:32 pm

Aww, thanks, JD.  That was sweet of you to do! Thanks, and I look forward to reading more.  *hugs*




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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/23/2006 10:25 pm

You could have done better on this. The age didn't come through clearly at all, and some of it pulled on the kind of cliches one expects to see in underdeveloped Dursley abuse fanfiction. You also... with a songfic, you have to make sure that the song really adds to the story and that the story is complimented by the song. Uraj, you can write better than this.




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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
11/23/2006 01:12 pm
Great job! Just so you know, though, the end is in all "block" formatting... you may want to fix that, because it makes it a bit hard to read. Nice ending, especially, and I love how you portrayed Harry (and his thoughts).

Author's Response: Thanks :) for going through this and being super critical



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