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Reviewer: Cheryl78 (Anonymous)
11/20/2006 12:27 pm

Right said bro!

I still don't like Slughorn that much, but he has enough heart to regret his foolishness.




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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/18/2006 11:49 pm

This is pretty good, and given how picky I am about drabbles, you know that's high praise.

It could still be perfected for more impact, and I didn't really like the 'stench of guilt' phrase (it smells bad? just struck me oddly, meh), but this was really good. Cheers for improvement!




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Reviewer: MuggleMomma (Anonymous)
11/18/2006 01:44 pm
Wow! To be honest, it's not often that I enjoy 100 word shorts...but this was really very good...a nice snippet into a very important moment in Horace Slughorn's life.  Great job!


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Reviewer: Pianochic1703 (Signed)
11/18/2006 12:46 pm

nice one, as always, Jay... Keep them coming.

 Crystal




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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
11/18/2006 10:02 am
Well, I was going to review last night, but I think if I did it wouldn't have made any sense, so:

Thanks so much! And *giggles at the Vedasuzie* That's such a great way to portray Slughorn's thoughts as he modified his memory, so great job! :D



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